Review A YA Novel: “These Great Affects”


“You know when you’re fifteen, you’re at that awkward stage where your parents still think you’re a kid and it seems like they’re prohibiting you from crossing over into adulthood? That was a terrible age. And it was an even worse age for me than others because that was the year I killed my first love. Only, we didn’t fall in love until after that happened.”

Meet Adelle Hitchens, the center of my upcoming young adult book, These Great Affects. She’s an unambitious writer who is a “hardcore introvert” who watches The Walking Dead behind her parents’ backs. Like most adolescents, she thinks love isn’t for her.

Enter Trill Vikus. Self-obsorbed, handsome, unpredictable, and a terrible driver. He’s obsessed with the band Fun. and is convinced that if he ever met Elle Fanning he would propose to her on the spot.

Most love stories are about two people who are completely different from one another. How different can you get than one being alive and the other being…well, not?

Want to be the first to read it? Check out the video below or read on to find out how to score an advanced reader’s copy.


Email me at and just ask! I’ll put you on a list and when the book is complete I’ll send everyone out a copy and post your video review online, and print your name in the book, and share your blog or any other social media outlet you would want publicized.

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About Andrew Toy
Writer when I'm not being a husband or dad. So mostly just a husband and dad.

31 Responses to Review A YA Novel: “These Great Affects”

  1. Ocean Bream says:

    Have sent you an email 🙂 Your book sounds exciting and original, something that is certainly eye-catching! Best of luck writing.

  2. Dziey says:

    This literally sounds so good!!

  3. praeze says:

    I’m gonna love your book 😍

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  5. I know we’ve already been chatting in emails, but I thought I’d hop on the comments to say that I’m looking forward to reading TGA!

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  9. jstgina says:

    I so can’t wait for it. I find myself unconsciously waiting for updates.. *fingers crossed* 😀 😉

  10. I cannot wait for this book! Emailing you right now!

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  13. septembersrose says:

    I’m next in line! I’m so glad you popped up on my blog so I could find you! I’m definitely excited about your book!

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